Good research.
Good research.
I always appreciate a good speedpainting, since it really does help other improve by observing an example of workflow, technique, and visual priority. Well done.
Although you showed technical skill, an animation is nothing without purpose. This had a story that was simple, yet confusing all the same. Not much context for the plot, but I did like how you worked the camera angles, the different perspectives, and the conscious decision to discolor the blood out of consideration for the potential audience.
Still, it just wasn't that interesting.
It's a complete animation, with good character acting. Everything went relatively smoothly, and the timing was good. It has all the technical awareness of a practiced individual.
The story isn't really that good, but I'm not gonna split hairs on this one. Good job.
This is pretty clever. The jokes were a bit dry, but I enjoyed the literal description follow-ups. The character designs were certainly odd, which added greatly to the charm and immediately sets the tone.... until Potatoman. I'm sorry, but the super-villainy suddenness was TOO jarring within the setting, as strange as it was, and the anti-climactic wrap-up left me feeling disappointed. In light of the fact that you did this in only 2 DAYS, I think it's otherwise marvelous.
Just outta nowhere. I am here to start following the footsteps of the greatest Flash animators out there. Of course, I'm just a beginner, so don't expect miracles just yet. - 2008. l 7 years later... l 2015 - I'm back. I've done much, yet much to do.
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